Orani - Cosmetic Surgery (an argumentative essay)

Nowadays popularity in society has changed. People who have a brilliant appearance is welcomed more than others. There are many ways to improve their physical appearance, particulary with cosmetic surgery. Plenty of people these days modify their structure with this. This essay will talk about why people make a decision to have cosmetic surgery and they are pleased with its result. It also explains why some people argue that it is the wrong way to change their own sturcture as well as refuting the ideas of those who disagree with this issue.

Cosmetic surgery is fully intersting and people don't need to feel anxious about its side effects any more. Firstly, I think a proper cosmetic surgery can improve people's personality, and make them have more self-confident to get good chances in their lives. In my experience, a lot of people who have had cosmetic surgery have had their personality changed in positive ways and they look absolutely delighted with their good-looking appearance. Indeed, and article in the Times magazine revealed in research last year, that a large number of women who had had cosmetic surgery such as noses and upper eyelids could get good jobs particularly in the entertainment industry rather than people who have never adjusted their physical appearance. Secondly, medical technology these days is far better than ever, so it is definitely safe to have cosmetic surgery in trustworthy places. Nowadays, doctors have been developing methods of surgery, doing lots of research and inventing high technology equipment. So, I believe that the development of medical technology could relieve pain very well. According to a report in the Korean Times, a doctor who has been a cosmetic surgeon for 30 years discovered a new method of nose operation which they can be finished in only 15 minutes and patients spend a shorter time on recovery afterwards. Lastly, cosmetic surgery could prevent and fix some physical problems. A good example of this is my relative who had upper eyelids problem. They had become flabbly and almost covered her eyes, so she could not see aything clearly and they annoyed her a lot. After she had fixed them with cosmetic surgery, she is totally satisfied with the result. Infact, a research study in the U.K. revealed that breast augmentation surgery has decreased the risky rate of breast cancer. As a result, cosmetic surgery has a lot of impressive points, ignorance about these benefits may lose you the great opportunities to be a new person.

By contrast, some argue that people should be satisfied with their own natural physical appearance. "Cosmetic surgery is a short-term beauty fix and it can make people become addicted to it. There are many ways to conceal their weakpoints, for example, dressing up and doing exercises. Moreover, people who have had cosmetic surgery put themselves into risky situations" said a senior medical student who is protesting against it. This may seems strong enough to convince people to stop doing it, but there is some evidence about this, for instance, they do not mind becoming addicted to it because they are extremely delighted to refix their weak points as much as long as they have got the necessary information such as trustworthy places, reputable doctors, and the side effects. In other words, they believe that they have maked an appropriate decision based on their sensibility. In addition, others protest that doing cosmetic surgery is a waste of time and money. It is likely to believe this argument, but spending time on searching data about this and collection money in order to fulfill their aspirations are worth it.

To conclude, cosmetic surgery is a fabulous way to change unsatisfied figures to be awesome shape in order to enhance people's pride to live properly. Furthermore, I do suggest that not only trustworthy sources of all details are essential, but also the people who have done and are planning to do cosmetic surgery should look after themselves completely well for being perfectly attractive people, and for those who are worried about its side effects, and think differently, if you keep seeking more information you will definitely prove your uncertainty that there are advantages rather than disadvantages.